la jolla drowning
Which of these two options to read a story you like best?
I'm writing a story about a beautiful woman doctor named Jamie, who lives in La Jolla (San Diego). The last part of this story is a love story between Jamie and Scott, but I want to be tragic. I think Jamie was drowned at sea when she swims or perhaps when she is swimming a shark attack Jamie cut in the leg and died on the way to hospital. Which of these options do you prefer? Could you help me with another option? Thanks! BESOS
i was without doubt the shark attack option, especially if you want to be a big surprise to her readers when he died. would be much more tragic if he died on the way, instead of drowning. that give more hope to people who did not believe he would die when goes to hospital (due in part to the fact that she is a doctor herseldf). that could have pretended to be improving in the way and only then could slowly lose control over life. oh, and Scott has certainly been there to see his love die. would be horrible. I hate stories with bad end, and I'm here to tell you that most the Tragically, two! I can not believe! Lol I hope you can help! have a nice day … 
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